Research and Planning 11/20 (D) Production 41/60 (C)
You have completed some sound research for your magazine, and there is some evidence of planning. To improve further complete your draft work and a production plan. You may also want to conduct a focus group with members of your target audience to get feedback on the first draft of your magazine. Tidy up the presentation of your blog, embed your research and planning, make sure all links work (the main drafts link does not), and make sure the headings for each blog post are clear and accurate.
Your construction demonstrates a strong understanding of genre and target audience. The magazine demonstrates excellent potential and with some improvements will achieve the high grade you are capable of. To improve further look at the placement of the coverlines on the front cover, and the use of font. Consider removing the images at the bottom of the page, and remember all images must be original. Give page numbers to each of the article headings on the contents page, and check for any typos (albubum). Do not use the same image twice on the contents and then double page spread. You may want to use the image from your contents page for either the front cover and double page spread and take a second set of pictures for the contents page. Consider adding a headline to the double page spread.
Research and Planning 11/20 (D)
ReplyDeleteProduction 41/60 (C)
You have completed some sound research for your magazine, and there is some evidence of planning. To improve further complete your draft work and a production plan. You may also want to conduct a focus group with members of your target audience to get feedback on the first draft of your magazine. Tidy up the presentation of your blog, embed your research and planning, make sure all links work (the main drafts link does not), and make sure the headings for each blog post are clear and accurate.
Your construction demonstrates a strong understanding of genre and target audience. The magazine demonstrates excellent potential and with some improvements will achieve the high grade you are capable of. To improve further look at the placement of the coverlines on the front cover, and the use of font. Consider removing the images at the bottom of the page, and remember all images must be original. Give page numbers to each of the article headings on the contents page, and check for any typos (albubum). Do not use the same image twice on the contents and then double page spread. You may want to use the image from your contents page for either the front cover and double page spread and take a second set of pictures for the contents page. Consider adding a headline to the double page spread.